Wow, this makes... how many remakes of the same icon?
I see there is a warmer light source here, that definitely suits Fluttershy . The highlights here look almost white, even though they're actually pale yellow, and that really stands out, but they also make her snout look very round. (Perhaps it's not just the highlight, maybe it's also how you shaped it.) What size did you originally make this? 100x100? 150x150?
The funny things is that about every decent 3D representation of a pony I've found so far seems to have only one visible eye at 3/4 due to the curvature of the face. I end up referencing that feature and end up with this.
Another Fluttershy, huh? :P I expect we'll see another one by June!
The muzzle seems a bit small, and being able to see that much of her face behind her nose without an eye being visible is... strange, I'll say. I know I'm very particular with my own faces, but this is how I feel. That is a lot of face behind the central line without an eye in view.
Of course it's small. Small noses are part of the intention behind how Lauren Faust stylized ponies. Or... is there something more that I'm not yet seeing?
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